I do like this one, but I do prefer the updated design you have! You could just have the front freehand piece by itself and nothing on the back and it would be a very awesome entry. Amazed that it's freehand! Please see my entry at [link] !
the back of the shirt really isn't doing much for this potentially great design, a plain font would have been a lot tidier (like arial or helvetica), maybe if you put the DA logo top centre (and straight to conform with the straight lines of the front) of the shirt and the text centred (and a lot smaller) below it it would look a lot cleaner/professional, its letting your image down a lot. in regards to the front design it's really lovely and detailed, the monotone really makes it feel classy. really i feel the back just needs a little clean up and it would make a wonderful t shirt, have you thought of any different, catchier slogans that maybe mix art and design for the future? eg. "Imagine the Future" or something like that.
you got reason! but the problem now is if i change the picture i lose my vote don't you think?i agree with you about the back of the shirt! i will try to change!i will sent you again the link if i make something new about this!